I remember when I was a little kid I used to sit on my dad's ottaman and fall asleep while he was reading to me. I could dream about anything I put my mind to! and so a couple of years later went by and I went to my tree house and I started to write about one speicel dream I doo remember . When I was a little girl used to go to a library but it was not an ordanary library it was a magic one the end!
Hi Charli, I like how you linked this picture to your childhood. Remember to go back to the learning focus and success criteria. Have you used an -ly starter? I can see an AAAWWUBBIS sentence (when). Remember to try and add the challenge sentence to your paragraph also.
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